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Polar Vortex

Courting countries
shimmering cold
winter's pillow gold
smacked faces stiff
sea to sea
layered clothes
head to toe
icebox noses
rooftop snow
chimneys blow
hair stiff
white blitz
fingertips bitten
crippling cars
bourbon tripping
withered trees
ice pack rivers
animals quiver
brick prints
buff smoke
air chokes
honker down
ghost towns
black ice paths
Alps skiing
broken legs
sculptured casts
family blasts.

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