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MY SELFIE TEACHER (March Contest) Ode to the cellphone

Submitted by Simon on Wed, 2018-03-21 05:29

Many years ago I know you
Many miles away we travel
Many times we discuss
Many things I don’t know you teach me
Many friends you unrelated me with
Many songs we sing together
So many we are to do

I call you my closet friend
My partner in technology
My hand to hand walker
You keep me company when am lonely
You expose me to the world
You help me talk to distance people
For you are my selfie teacher

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Ode To The Cellphone [March contest]
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