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A Loose Tooth

shelter me in from hand to chin where everybody wins
choose the day the night is far spent in fear I calm all cheers
celebrate on occasion your bringing me down spent from painting the town...,
look into my eyes a devide state responds,

eggs Benedict and orange juice turn to the kettle for living proof
penetrate me thine living doll a soldier of reproof taking a nice hot shower
green is the grass you made for tea hoping sometime that she would marry me
devide us then guide us from living proof another loose tooth

Come away through the sultan breeze..,
bridge the gap to make believe
you will succeed
onto the most believed destiny

one is the singer calming nerves so late for dinner
candid soup respect all proof;
smoking cigarettes
can you handle it

life is a highway I want to ride it all day long
in columns of plush delivery in a new found discovery
just thank you please staying all apart at the seams
below the breeze

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