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toni sears2
Member since April 14, 2012
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He Changed Me
The man upstairs has changed my life a work that was originally started from within
I really don't think about what my world was like or how things could have been
Jesus has been my major supporter not a BFF he has really been a good friend
If I leave this earth tomorrow there is one thing I know for sure
How great the Lord has been to me my rock, my shelter, my protector
I will have no doubts about this in the end.
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- February 2013
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09 Sat
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09 SatReceived a critique
on He Changed Me from @Ian.T
"I didn't like this write but that is due to its theme, that someone or something has helped you is fine, therefore what ever helps you to become a better person then that is OK. If you live a good life amidst all the cr…" -
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07 ThuReceived a critique
on He Changed Me from @Frenchf
"religion is mutated by man who corrupts it to suit his own end If you select out what is good and decent in all religions they make a lot of good sense.Meant to protect us but some evil paedophilic ar.. h..le comes alon…" -
07 ThuReceived a critique
on He Changed Me from @weirdelf
"It shattered me and I am learning from it. Life goes on for a while. No mythical being has anything to do with it. How would you react to a normal seeming person who insisted that 3=1? Probably the same way I react to t…" -
06 WedReceived a critique
on He Changed Me from @Frenchf
"May well have been aided by the good Lord! Agree with your comments but as a person who believes there is an extra dimension to fate- liked the verse" -
06 WedReceived a critique
on He Changed Me from @weirdelf
"I'll just critique the prosody, ok? Using long lines is a great idea, and poetically ambitious. These lines could be split though The man upstairs has changed my life a work that was originally started from within I rea…" -
05 TueFirst publication
He Changed Me
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05 TuePosted a poem
He Changed Me
"The man upstairs has changed my life a work that was originally started from within" - April 2012
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