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Critique by Request

Submitted by Pugilist on Fri, 2015-04-10 17:20

If you would like a work critiqued, let me know via PM.

The rules are simple:

1) You ask for an honest critique
2) I give you one
3) You decide what to do from there

You never have to agree with me, but if you decide to call me names, please make them amusing and original

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Comments

scribbler

Fri, 2015-04-10 17:41

Hi Johnathan

I am aware of the past when you would give critiques which the writer(s) took as being personal attacks. Some people Do have very thin skins. I am not such. You can always feel free to offer critique on anything of mine you run across that you want. Of course I'm fully aware that time is limited and you don't have time to offer detailed critique on every thing that any single writer posts but I'll be glad to see whatever you have to say when you do drop in..................stan

judyanne

Fri, 2015-04-10 20:58

I would be more than happy

for you to drop in on any of my writes.... tear them to pieces if you wish... I always appreciate an honest critique

love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

mand

Sat, 2015-04-11 12:09

Me too

I've seen how you critique, I'm with Judy, it would be invaluable to have someone like you giving your honest opinion!

Love to you

Mand xxxx

Rula

Sat, 2015-04-11 16:33

I have asked for it

the first time and still looking for it from the experts.
Thank you in advance.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

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weirdelf

Tue, 2015-05-05 17:58

I suspect that, like me, tou have mellowed a bit

Yet I always honour your honest and integrity.
Fire away!

cheers,
Jess
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Critique by Request