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Once apon I time I truly am insaneThe doctors always said there was something wrong with my brainI look with my mouth and feel with my ears but no worry can I seeBut every ones looking like im not gonna be a sad sceanIm happy here I scream aloudBut only in my brain respondsAll the characters in my roomAre all to busy to belongSo I pray another dayTo the pop can god I madeAnd that’s just the begingingOf a life that’s surly tameThis room is to white I tell lucyThe girl that comes and goesShe nods her head and says goodbyeWow what lovely toesThey truly seek the beautyThey truly seek and findBut truly I don’t seeAnything wrong happening with my mind
— Tessadiana, Jan 15, 2009

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