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Having a lot of trouble with this....

A few days ago, a couple of lines popped into my head.  I wrote them down, but haven't been able to expand on them - nor do I know what to call it.  Any suggestions?  I'm willing to do a co-write with anyone that would make good sense out of all this.  Thanks in advance for any help.  I'll write it straight through with no formatting.  Here goes:


Once the dust settles, it will be clear that neither of us are who we claim to be.  


IF Y'ALL ARE INTERESTED IN THE FINAL RESULT:  http://www.neopoet.com/node/14285
Thanks to all who responded - this was an awesome experience.


 

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