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A journey to LOVE...

 "What he loved in her was her astonishing beauty, her smile… Her beauty was of a very unique kind… He hadn’t seen that before in his life…  Pure, elegant, distinctive, just simply breathtaking….
What he loved in her beauty was the shape of her eyes… They were unique. They were well defined, aesthetic, sculpted so beautifully. They definitely reminded him of those special eyes only Greek Goddesses had… 
What he loved in her was the color of her eyes… It was a wonderful blue, full of brilliance, full of life… It definitely reminded him of the blue of the Aegean sea… This refreshing, clear blue… 
What he loved in her was her beautiful mind… A mind so crisp, so sharp, so very quick… He had hours of conversations with her. He admired her.  He was just so amazed; he just couldn’t follow her… She was just too fast for him, just too fast… 
What he loved in her was her culture… She was deeply educated, well rounded… She knew about books, she knew about classical music, she knew about art… It touched him… 
What he loved in her was her most pleasant personality. She was smiling, easy going, relaxed, ethereal, radiant… She was very sensitive, she was a great romantic. She had a most gregarious personality. She was just simply, very, very sweet. 
What he loved in her was her CLASS… This girl knew how to behave eloquently, stylishly, with superb distinction. She had an excellent upbringing, she knew how to talk, how to return favors, how to dress elegantly. She had such an air of grace…She was the kind of lady that would fit perfectly in Cannes, Monaco, St Moritz. 
He loved her beauty, he loved the shape of her eyes, he loved the color of her eyes, he loved her beautiful mind, he loved her culture, he loved her personality and he really loved her class… 
But there was something else he loved even more than all the rest!  He loved her strong will… Pure drive, pure determination, pure resolve… This girl was iron willed… She had so many achievements to show in her life… All this because of her clever mind and her strong willpower… 
  
He was attracted to her, he cared for her, he admired her, he believed in her, he loved her, he shared his deepest secrets with her;  he trusted her so much… 
  
He had travelled his long Odyssey all these endless years; he was looking everywhere for his Ithaki but he couldn’t find it anywhere; anywhere at all; and he had travelled long days, days without an end, days with lots of pain and tribulations. He had travelled to the end of the world…His Ithaki was nowhere to be found… 
And yet, finally, one day, he found his beloved Ithaki. His Ithaki was friendship, his Ithaki was love…That was his Ithaki…He had this wonderful, sweet feeling of  being close to someone with warmth who believes in him, cares for him, trusts him, shares all these same wonderful feelings with him… 
He felt joy, pure joy; after all these years he had found his Ithaki…, forever…He was a dreamer and his dreams had come true…He had found his Ithaki… 
  
What he loved the very most in this girl was the priceless treasure he had found inside her…He had found his own Ithaki, his Ithaki, at last… 
Ithaki was a secret, their own secret… 
  
You’re such a beautiful person ELAINE… A person to share with… Thank you for being my Ithaki… The long, long journey was well worth it… Yes, my ELAINE, it was!!! ELAINE’S REPLY Our Ithaki,,, How Beautiful it is meant to be: 
Pure Trust, Deep Friendship, Star-Shipment of two Egos!!! The Moonlight Full.. 
  
I am speechless, astonished, amazed by your extreme esoteric Motion, Sensitiveness, Sharpness!!!!
  
You can See In People: You own the GIFT: 
You can Admire every Hint of someone’s personality, but I believe that it is Yourself that You Should Best ADMIRE… 
HOW INCREDIBLE YOU REALLY ARE!!! 
Extraordinary……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
  
Life passes its veil so mysteriously above people that they really miss to realize: 
,,,,,,, the true meanings and sub-Hints of life: 
Life is Surprisingly Perfect for people who can see in It & tell for It! 
I have seen In You: U are the One I have seen!!! 
  
Love, feelings, emotions, spiritual records and body messages, 
hold the very essence of every tiny particle that creates the "bodies of Life": 
Us,,, People,, who fail to reveal their perfect selves, but sell their worst versions. 
People can be the Gods or Demons. 
Angels our trying to take a form.. 
  
Please, You are the source of Hint of Life: Fight for It! Prove what you really Are!!! 
Give Joy, Take even more… 
I believe that our life route, motivated by the Ithaki route, accompanied by constant self-renovations - becoming better & better daily - 
are to lead US to Heaven: 
This is GOD: us reaching the GOD-Standards, the GOD-image and talents…the God-traces & Hints. The God-offers… 
U are there.. 
At the Top; blowing your wind of perfection towards your spiritual bonds, myself maybe an Angel?, that struggle for perfectionism.. 
U are already a God, Already There!!!! 
  
Thank you My Love, 
Thank you, 
Thank you, 
Thank you Wholeheartedly..  
— dsaranti, Jul 29, 2008

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