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His Ithaki, her Ithaki, their own Ithaki

What he loved in her was her astonishing beauty,

her special smile… Pure, elegant,

just simply breathtaking 

what he loved in her was the colour of her eyes… .

What he loved in her was her beautiful mind…

A mind so crisp, so sharp, so very smart…

what he loved in her was her most lovely personality.

She was so very tender, she had a loving heart.

He had travelled his long Odyssey

all these endless years;

 but his Ithaki was nowhere to be found

he travelled the world,

visited far away places

northbound and southbound

he had travelled long days, days without an end,

days with lots of pain and tribulations

and yet, finally, one day, he found his beloved Ithaki.

After all this pain and endless missions

he found his hard sought Ithaki.

His Ithaki was friendship, his Ithaki was love,

his Ithaki was sharing. It was deep affection,

it was authentic trust, it was pure joy,

it was wonderful caring

He was a dreamer and all his dreams had come true…

He had found his Ithaki

His Ithaki was his Elaine. It was now their Ithaki, their very own Ithaki

They had both wandered the world desperately searching for each other

and finally, after all these endless years

the magic veil of fate brought them so ever close to one another.

The veil of fate had brought them together, the veil of fate would keep them together forever…

ELAINE’S REPLY  Our Ithaki,,,

How Beautiful it is meant to be: 
Pure Trust, Deep Friendship,

Star-Shipment of two Egos!!! The Moonlight Full… 
  
I am speechless, astonished,

amazed by your extreme esoteric Motion,

Sensitiveness, Sharpness!!!!
  
You can See In People: You own the GIFT: 
You can Admire every Hint of someone’s personality,

but I believe that it it is Yourself

that You Should Best ADMIRE… 
HOW INCREDIBLE YOU REALLY ARE!!! 
Extraordinary……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
  
Life passes its veil so mysteriously above people

that they really miss to realize: 
,,,,,,, the true meanings and sub-Hints of life: 
Life is Surprisingly Perfect

for people who can see in It & tell for It! 
I have seen In You: U are the One I have seen!!! 
  
Love, feelings, emotions,

spiritual records and body messages, 
hold the very essence of every tiny particle

that creates the "bodies of Life": 
Us,,, People,, who fail to reveal their perfect selves,

but sell their worst versions. 
People can be the Gods or Demons. 
Angels our trying to take a form.. 
  
Please, You are the source of Hint of Life:

Fight for It! Prove what you really Are!!! 
Give Joy, Take even more… 
I believe that our life route, motivated by the Ithaki route,

accompanied by constant self-renovations –

becoming better & better every day - 
are to lead US to Heaven: 
This is GOD: us reaching the GOD-Standards,

the GOD-image and talents…the God-traces & Hints God-offers… 
U are there.. 
At the Top; blowing your wind of perfection

towards your spiritual bonds, myself maybe an Angel?,

that struggle for perfectionism.. 
U are already a God, Already There!!!! 
  
Thank you My Love, 
Thank you, 
Thank you, 

Thank you Wholeheartedly.