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His Ithaki, her Ithaki, their own Ithaki
her special smile… Pure, elegant,
just simply breathtaking
what he loved in her was the colour of her eyes… .
What he loved in her was her beautiful mind…
A mind so crisp, so sharp, so very smart…
what he loved in her was her most lovely personality.
She was so very tender, she had a loving heart.
He had travelled his long Odyssey
all these endless years;
but his Ithaki was nowhere to be foundhe travelled the world,
visited far away places
northbound and southbound
he had travelled long days, days without an end,
days with lots of pain and tribulations
and yet, finally, one day, he found his beloved Ithaki.
After all this pain and endless missions
he found his hard sought Ithaki.
His Ithaki was friendship, his Ithaki was love,his Ithaki was sharing. It was deep affection,
it was authentic trust, it was pure joy,
it was wonderful caring
He was a dreamer and all his dreams had come true…
He had found his Ithaki…
His Ithaki was his Elaine. It was now their Ithaki, their very own Ithaki…
They had both wandered the world desperately searching for each other
and finally, after all these endless years
the magic veil of fate brought them so ever close to one another.
The veil of fate had brought them together, the veil of fate would keep them together forever…
ELAINE’S REPLY Our Ithaki,,,How Beautiful it is meant to be:
Pure Trust, Deep Friendship,
Star-Shipment of two Egos!!! The Moonlight Full…
I am speechless, astonished,
Sensitiveness, Sharpness!!!!
You can See In People: You own the GIFT:
You can Admire every Hint of someone’s personality,
that You Should Best ADMIRE…
HOW INCREDIBLE YOU REALLY ARE!!!
Extraordinary……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
Life passes its veil so mysteriously above people
that they really miss to realize:
,,,,,,, the true meanings and sub-Hints of life:
Life is Surprisingly Perfect
for people who can see in It & tell for It!
I have seen In You: U are the One I have seen!!!
Love, feelings, emotions,
spiritual records and body messages,
hold the very essence of every tiny particle
that creates the "bodies of Life":
Us,,, People,, who fail to reveal their perfect selves,
but sell their worst versions.
People can be the Gods or Demons.
Angels our trying to take a form..
Please, You are the source of Hint of Life:
Fight for It! Prove what you really Are!!!
Give Joy, Take even more…
I believe that our life route, motivated by the Ithaki route,
becoming better & better every day -
are to lead US to Heaven:
This is GOD: us reaching the GOD-Standards,
the GOD-image and talents…the God-traces & Hints God-offers…
U are there..
At the Top; blowing your wind of perfection
that struggle for perfectionism..
U are already a God, Already There!!!!
Thank you My Love,
Thank you,
Thank you,