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Nathan G
Member since July 10, 2026
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Buzzing
On a sun-gilded hill
A man sits, eyes tightly shut.
His breathing is deliberate and smooth.
His fingers grasp the blades of grass.
The humming phone beside him reads
"Jones Family Law."
He glances at it, then shuts his eyes once more.
Nathan G’s timeline
- July 2026
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11 SatCritiqued
"Surface Tension" by @Asa B.
"This is an interesting take on what I believe is the chasm between heaven and hell. If I'm right, then hell is not merely a place of torment in this poem; it holds the accusations against the speaker in heaven. But, uph…" -
11 SatFirst critique offered
on "Surface Tension" by @Asa B.
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10 FriReceived a critique
on That I might come even to his seat from @Asa B.
"This says many words in few. Your way of describing desperation is very well done, and you made excellent use of punctuation to express the pace. Very deft work." -
10 FriFirst publication
That I might come even to his seat
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10 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Texas Lutheran with a weakness for ancient hymns and Bach.
Location: USA
Favorite Poets
Seamus Heaney
Homer
William Butler Yeats
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