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M.R. Divine
Member since June 15, 2020
Member for 6 years, 1 month
Alas! My Love
Wherefore have you gone?
I search this stalagmited crevice that is
My mourning heart-
Where memories of you lie
Like shattered shards of glass.
Alas, my love
Here me I beg!
He has taken you!
Laid you on rose,
And covered you in thorn!
Alas, my love,
With Death’s violent kiss
You too
Have forgotten me.
M.R. Divine’s timeline
- June 2025
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15 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2021
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15 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2020
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17 WedReceived a critique
on Alas! My Love from @Rula
"I think I had my mind a bit absent when I suggested the (a) thorn thing, maybe (thorns) works better?" -
17 WedReceived a critique
on Alas! My Love from @Rula
"M,R. Divine A great first submission! I'd call it bittersweet. I liked everything about the piece, but not the title. I thought it deserves a more calling title, but that is only me. Wait and see what others have to say…" -
16 TueFirst publication
Alas! My Love
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16 Tue
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15 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I have been writing for many years, but recently just published my first poetry book When Lightning Strikes. I am working on another book called Ode to my Death, and in response am looking for ideas and communities to better critique my work before it hits the shelves.
Location: United States of America
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