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Lunegirl
Member since February 20, 2012
Member for 14 years, 3 months
Daemon King
They tell me that love don't come knocking for the strange
they tell me faded hope is the insignificance of the deranged
well won't you come sit by my side
spend sometime with a mad lost girl
I'll liven up your boring life with my sad story on a loop i tell
they tell me that love don't come knocking for the strange
they tell me faded hope is the insignificance of the deranged
She saw me staring right through your heart
holding my breath till your apart
gripping a thing called no reality
sinking my fingers into metaphorical skin
holding to tight
unstitching your seems
undoing your mind
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blind smiles and to full words
seeping into the cracks
further tearing your solidarity.
I see in him my head
i feel him in my skin
remnants of yesterday
bottled up within
the curse that wont be crucified
the sin that wont be cast aside
I'm all cut up
I'm all undone
layer over layer
of echoes ghost love
twineing through the silence
darkly shining through the sun
Your marbled through my veins
painted round my soul
permenting frozen lungs
your my daemon king
I see in him my head
i feel him in my skin
remnants of yesterday
bottled up within
the curse that wont be crucified
the sin that wont be cast aside
Lunegirl’s timeline
- February 2022
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20 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- February 2017
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20 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2013
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20 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2012
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20 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- April 2010
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13 TueReceived a critique
on Lucifer and Gabriel from @Dalton
"this one reads like a chant. beautifully read aloud. i love the lore of angels. you have painted a beautiful picture for us all. love John X" -
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- March 2010
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10 Wed
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06 Sat
- January 2010
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15 FriHighest posting month
January 2010 — 22 poems
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06 Wed
- December 2009
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01 TueFirst publication
Shallow is the man
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01 TueFirst critique offered
on "Who Is The Alien?" by @L.M. Troch
About Me
Recent Work
Great poetry,
what never was
Hunger
The moon.
Barren cream pearls and glitter
Lucifer and Gabriel
Dirty Little Fairy
Dancer girl hurts
The war of courage and cowardice
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