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Luke Weyland
Member since August 4, 2023
Member for 2 years, 10 months
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The Damsel
The damsel
Sought out dragons
To rest beside
Trusting that the knights
Would arrive there in time
And time after time they did
But one year ago
The knights arrived
Mere minutes too late
And my daughter lay dead.
Luke Weyland’s timeline
- August 2024
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04 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2023
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31 Thu
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31 Thu
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11 FriReceived a critique
on The Damsel from @Lavender
"Hello, Luke, I can tell by the brevity of your poem that you chose each word very carefully. I felt the emotions throughout, and the silence they bring. Sincere sympathy to you and your family. Lavender" -
11 Fri
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11 FriFirst critique offered
on "Bleed the Pain" by @RoseBlack
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11 Fri
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08 TueReceived a critique
on Spirit World from @Geezer
"I share your sense of loss... My wife and I lost a son to much the same kind of situation; through his own actions. The sense of loss is great, although not unexpected. It is a good thing that these aborignals do this f…" -
08 TueFirst publication
Spirit World
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08 Tue
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04 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
About me
Aged 61, Married had six children, one passed away. write poems about matters I care about eg peace, social justice issues and family
Location: New South Wales Australia
Recent Work
Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| The Damsel | August 2023 New Member Contest | – |