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Member since July 12, 2026

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The Aloe

Posted Jul 12, 2026 · 17 lines · 2 critiques

leaves wilting,

stem turned brown,

left too long

in the same water.

spongy

carrot-firm

plant it

in sandy soil

and wait

July 2026
12 Sun

Received a critique
on The Aloe from @Geezer
"to agree with the A.I. about those lines; it sounding like a gardening note. I had the crazy thought... Maybe it is! Yes, it probably is a metaphor for growing old, but maybe... ~ Geezer."
12 Sun

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The Aloe
12 Sun

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The Aloe
"leaves wilting,"
Open thread 17 lines
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About me

Irish woman dabbling in poetry. I love Seamus Heaney, Patrick Kavanagh and Joseph Fasano

Location: IRL

Posted: 12 July, 2026

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