Džein

Member since February 25, 2026

Member for 3 months, 11 days

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Posted Apr 22, 2026 · 16 lines · 4 critiques

Need
someone like you
here
Someone who choose
to care
with fully loving
heart
If that was ever
like that
Someone who choose
to end
difficulties with smile
Who choose to laugh
with you
instead crying about it
in bed

Džein’s timeline

April 2026
23 Thu

Received a critique
on * from @Geezer
"I think that you may also go with what the AI says about using chooses if you are speaking in the present tense. ~ Geezer"
22 Wed

Received a critique
on * from @Geezer
"your title? Or is it "Need" ? Just two mistakes. The first one is of syntax : When using the word [choose] in the past tense, it is spelled [chose]. The second, I would write the line: "If that was ever like that", like…"
22 Wed

Posted a poem
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"Need"
Open thread 16 lines
15 Wed

Posted a poem
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"When you put on…"
Open thread 27 lines
March 2026
31 Tue

Contest commendation
03/26 Being found

with "The cave into your heart".
31 Tue

First contest commendation
03/26 Being found

with the poem "The cave into your heart".
26 Thu

Received a critique
on The tree from @Geezer
"a big fan of trees. You have described the thoughts that move through my mind whenever I think about trees. I really like the stream of thought, with one sensation after another moving like a gentle zephyr through the t…"
26 Thu

Posted a poem
The tree
"Standing strong in the storm"
Open thread 24 lines
16 Mon

Received a critique
on The cave into your heart from @Lavender
"This is brief, and the metaphor is straightforward in its message. I wonder about using "Do I" so often and perhaps use a comma after "layers" and extend the other thoughts within one question: Do I need a pick to dig t…"
15 Sun

Posted a poem
The cave into your heart
"As a cave you are,"
Open thread 11 lines
15 Sun

Critiqued
"questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco
"Nicely written, it is possible to feel it clearly while reading. It touches deeper parts of people or consciousness..."
15 Sun

First critique offered
on "questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco
10 Tue

Received a critique
on Untamable from @Geezer
"the theme of resurrection, of an eternal circle. I think that deep down, we all kind of believe in that. That we never die. I applaud the use of plain language with minimal punctuation, to present the story. Nice job, ~…"
09 Mon

Posted a poem
Untamable
"Laziness?"
Open thread 24 lines
February 2026
27 Fri

Received a critique
on Uneven from @Clentin
"Liked your poem, Welcome to Neopoet, keep writing!"
26 Thu

First publication
Uneven
26 Thu

Posted a poem
Uneven
"I hate"
Open thread 10 lines
25 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I love create stories or just keep moments by putting them on paper. I'm a Czech student so my English is not perfect but I'm also trying to write English poetry lately because I have few international friends and they love it.

Location: CZE

Recent Work

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Posted: 22 April, 2026

Updated: 23 April, 2026

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Posted: 15 April, 2026

The tree

Posted: 26 March, 2026

Updated: 4 April, 2026

The cave into your heart

Posted: 15 March, 2026

Updated: 26 March, 2026

Untamable

Posted: 9 March, 2026

Updated: 15 March, 2026

Uneven

Posted: 26 February, 2026

Updated: 1 March, 2026

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Contest Wins

Winning Submission	Contest	Contest Date
The cave into your heart	03/26 Being found	1 March, 2026 – 31 March, 2026

Džein

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on * from @Geezer

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03/26 Being found

03/26 Being found

on The tree from @Geezer

The tree

on The cave into your heart from @Lavender

The cave into your heart

"questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco

on "questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco

on Untamable from @Geezer

Untamable

on Uneven from @Clentin

Uneven

Uneven

Membership begins

About Me

Recent Work

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The tree

The cave into your heart

Untamable

Uneven

Contest Wins

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