Džein

Member since February 25, 2026

Member for 4 months, 26 days

Writting to yourself

Posted Jul 5, 2026 · 24 lines · 1 critiques

Trying to send
an e-mail
to not yet existing addresses
a postcard
to home, just someone else's
a song
to be played in implanted radio heads
an SMS
to devices already not knowing that
a message to your future self
it could be harder than one could have said

How?
In a bottle lost in the sea?
among the other trash

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by a pigeon, owl or medieval crow?
they'll be dead by then, nothing but ash
There's no certain way
Though sometimes
the words you didn't intend
to ever read again
make the real difference

the blackholes of notes
random words written in a corner of a page
a poem from your past self

Džein’s timeline

July 2026
05 Sun

Posted a poem
Writting to yourself
"Trying to send"
Open thread 24 lines
01 Wed

Posted a poem
What do I want?
"I want to see your eyes shining "
Open thread 19 lines
June 2026
10 Wed

Received a critique
on Poem for Monday from @Geezer
"I hate when that happens. Just when you are getting that Kumbaya feeling and then BLAM! But that's okay, we love you! You can always come here and get a hug. Ripping is not spelled like wrapping, [no - w]. I get the fee…"
10 Wed

Posted a poem
Poem for Monday
"Monday"
Open thread 18 lines
08 Mon

Posted a poem
Happiness
"Painted by all colours"
Open thread 21 lines
April 2026
23 Thu

Received a critique
on Need from @Geezer
"I think that you may also go with what the AI says about using chooses if you are speaking in the present tense. ~ Geezer"
22 Wed

Received a critique
on Need from @Geezer
"your title? Or is it "Need" ? Just two mistakes. The first one is of syntax : When using the word [choose] in the past tense, it is spelled [chose]. The second, I would write the line: "If that was ever like that", like…"
22 Wed

Posted a poem
Need
"Need"
Open thread 16 lines
15 Wed

Posted a poem
-
"When you put on…"
Open thread 27 lines
March 2026
31 Tue

Contest commendation
03/26 Being found

with "The cave into your heart".
31 Tue

First contest commendation
03/26 Being found

with the poem "The cave into your heart".
26 Thu

Received a critique
on The tree from @Geezer
"a big fan of trees. You have described the thoughts that move through my mind whenever I think about trees. I really like the stream of thought, with one sensation after another moving like a gentle zephyr through the t…"
26 Thu

Posted a poem
The tree
"Standing strong in the storm"
Open thread 24 lines
16 Mon

Received a critique
on The cave into your heart from @Lavender
"This is brief, and the metaphor is straightforward in its message. I wonder about using "Do I" so often and perhaps use a comma after "layers" and extend the other thoughts within one question: Do I need a pick to dig t…"
15 Sun

Posted a poem
The cave into your heart
"As a cave you are,"
Open thread 11 lines
15 Sun

Critiqued
"questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco
"Nicely written, it is possible to feel it clearly while reading. It touches deeper parts of people or consciousness..."
15 Sun

First critique offered
on "questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco
10 Tue

Received a critique
on Untamable from @Geezer
"the theme of resurrection, of an eternal circle. I think that deep down, we all kind of believe in that. That we never die. I applaud the use of plain language with minimal punctuation, to present the story. Nice job, ~…"
09 Mon

Posted a poem
Untamable
"Laziness?"
Open thread 24 lines
February 2026
27 Fri

Received a critique
on Uneven from @Clentin
"Liked your poem, Welcome to Neopoet, keep writing!"
26 Thu

First publication
Uneven
26 Thu

Posted a poem
Uneven
"I hate"
Open thread 10 lines
25 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I love create stories or just keep moments by putting them on paper. I'm a Czech student so my English is not perfect but I'm also trying to write English poetry lately because I have few international friends and they love it.

Location: CZE

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Winning Submission	Contest	Contest Date
The cave into your heart	03/26 Being found	1 March, 2026 – 31 March, 2026

on Poem for Monday from @Geezer

on Need from @Geezer

on Need from @Geezer

on The tree from @Geezer

on The cave into your heart from @Lavender

"questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco

on "questions i ask myself " by @leoferaco

on Untamable from @Geezer

on Uneven from @Clentin

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