chrisbyrne

Member since January 2, 2011

Member for 15 years, 5 months

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Small moves

Posted Mar 31, 2010 · 12 lines · 5 critiques

Breath slow. move in time.
In. Out, so hard to trace.
Love the change, mind. No place!

I am me, you can see.
Want, lust, need.
I exist in breath outside space.

Move in time, all is well.
Cold fact can shape;
All the forms to come.

I love life, time indeed.
need, forfill, centre. See.
Flowing out, I am me!

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January 2026
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Anniversary
15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
January 2012
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Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2011
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Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
April 2010
20 Tue

Received a critique
on Small moves from @Electric Blue
"Chris Well this is me also, think alike. But i feel on the outside looking in again longing to be part of something - someone. Yes I am me - but what is me? Electric Blue"
01 Thu

Received a critique
on Small moves from @Draki
"I like this straight away for it's simplicity and compactness. It's just about being, or at least a being's experience of being! I didn't realise until after a few reads that you were meant to be conveying the essence o…"
March 2010
31 Wed

Received a critique
on Small moves from @raskin
"Yes, I am me. Raskin"
31 Wed

Posted a poem
Small moves
"Breath slow. move in time."
Open thread 12 lines
January 2010
08 Fri

Posted a poem
love song for the lost
"Just a moment, in time or breath."
Open thread 24 lines
07 Thu

Posted a poem
Once upon a time
"A distant star, unreachable desire."
Open thread 17 lines
December 2009
26 Sat

First critique offered
on "She’s Gone " by @Barbara Writes
26 Sat

First publication
Losing
26 Sat

Most-discussed work
Losing

10 critiques to date.
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 5 poems