Blaqueman

Member since October 23, 2012

Member for 13 years, 7 months

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12 Poems

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Damaged

Posted Jan 31, 2019 · 9 lines · 1 critiques

What makes my life so tragic?

That I want to die
And like magic
I become
Healed
Made of Stone
Cascaded in pain
Looking for love
I am damaged

Blaqueman’s timeline

October 2022
23 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2019
14 Thu

Received a critique
on Damaged from @swamp-witch
"I don't believe we've met, so if I missed your arrival here on site, let me give you a belated welcome to Neopoet! As someone who has dealt with depression and suicidal thoughts since I was about 13 (I am now 26), I thi…"
January 2019
31 Thu

Posted a poem
Damaged
"What makes my life so tragic?"
Open thread 9 lines
October 2017
23 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
November 2015
09 Mon

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @wesley snow
"I'm afraid I didn't much care for it. This is prose, not poetry."
October 2013
23 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2012
31 Wed

Received a critique
on All I need( poetic suicide) from @Ian.T
"Even your title is trying to put you in the wrong place, your writing sounds as if you don't value your existence here, or where you are, this is the second piece of yours I have read, and as you have noticed they and m…"
27 Sat

Posted a poem
All I need( poetic suicide)
"All I need in this life is my pen some paper and a knife because when it comes to poetry I go insane in the brain and can't be contained I am on fire!!! Question my desire and I shall burn u like timber leaving u almost dismembered but u remember me from grade k through 3 I am that test u never passed that feeling u wouldn't couldn't or shouldn't last in my arena called education I am as amazing as a refugee lost in the wilderness"
Open thread 16 lines
23 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
26 Sat

Posted a poem
CLOUDZ
"Is my skin brown because I drink chocolate milk?"
Open thread 27 lines
24 Thu

First critique offered
on "Flower and Butterfly (Poem)" by @JahJahBrie
15 Tue

Highest posting month
June 2010 — 9 poems
08 Tue

First publication
AMERYKA (tribunal)