The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem, "Window Smudges," effectively utilizes a consistent rhyme scheme (ABAB) and a regular rhythm, which contributes to the overall flow and readability of the piece. The repetition of the first and last stanzas creates a sense of closure and continuity, enhancing the thematic unity of the poem.

The poem's central theme, the experiences and hopes of children with Fragile X and Down syndrome, is presented with sensitivity and respect. The use of specific details, such as the children's height smudges on the windows and their learning process, adds depth and authenticity to the portrayal.

However, the poem could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the children's individual experiences and perspectives. While the current approach provides an overview of their daily routine and hopes, incorporating specific anecdotes or personal insights could make the narrative more engaging and emotionally resonant.

The religious elements in the poem are integrated smoothly into the narrative, providing a source of hope and comfort for the children. However, the poem might be more universally relatable if it also explored secular sources of hope and resilience, such as the children's personal growth or the support they receive from their teachers.

The language and imagery of the poem are clear and accessible, although there is room for more vivid and original descriptions. For example, instead of saying "Each pronounced word is met with praise," the poem could show this scene in a more dynamic and sensory way.

Overall, "Window Smudges" is a thoughtful and well-structured poem that could be enhanced by a deeper exploration of its characters and more evocative language.

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it presents a picture of children with special needs in a respectful light and shows the delight in which these children learn new things and integrate with so-called normal society. I especially liked the mention of the children's height and the need for the windows to be cleaned every day. Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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things can get slow here. It happens now and then. If I send something and it doesn't seem to go, I will wait a minute or two and do something else and then renew the site, it will usually show up. Thanks for your reply. Yes, we do have a little bit of a problem with commenting, [but if you can believe it], it has improved as of late. Welcome aboard, and feel free to express yourself. Obey the golden rule kind of thing and everyone gets along fine. ~ Geezer.
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Hello, Paleoray,
What a tender observation, and how enduring the smudges on the windows are. It's the appreciation for the tiniest, but wonderfully discovered moments that give meaning to life.
Thank you,
L