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THREE P'S

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2022-02-25 13:56

There are more important issues today
to stop the world going astray

most important one is
Population
thus enhancing
Poverty
then greed of being
KING

Next you know it
what
the third P

This world is still running
we must take off our hats
Bow we must

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Populistic then humouristic
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-02-25 14:58

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be poetry? nice job, lovedly.

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Fri, 2022-02-25 20:56

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Cats thanks

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Geezer

Sat, 2022-02-26 18:16

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the third one is Pride! lovedly is getting better by the day! Good stuff! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2022-02-26 18:36

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Lovedly soonly has to b come an universal part
yes GEE
pride apart

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2022-02-27 12:36

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lovedly, and it would have been obvious, if I hadn't made it more complicated than it is ;)

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Sun, 2022-02-27 12:46

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Cats you are kind

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lovedly

Sun, 2022-02-27 12:15

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could b any thanks to thee

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