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Oblivious
Anticipation has filled me,
it boils, and it waits release
as my lips begin to tremble,
warmed by heart’s increase.
One touch, my body shudders
in surrender to private bliss,
then soft, moist and loving
I drift oblivious in the kiss
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Lavender
Wed, 2020-06-10 17:25
Oblivious
Hi, tyro,
There you, again. You are quite the romantic. I like the build up and anticipation of the moment that leads to 'drift oblivious in the kiss.' A tender and pure write.
Thank you,
L
tyro
Fri, 2020-06-12 04:00
thank you Lavender for you
thank you Lavender for you comment
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
Rula
Thu, 2020-06-11 09:24
Dear Tyro
I always believed that to be romantic is one thing, but to express it so well is another thing. What I wanted to say is that you have expressed yourself with words pretty well here. Congrats!!
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tyro
Fri, 2020-06-12 04:09
thank you dear Rula I always
thank you dear Rula I always appreciated your comments.
Now I hate to bring up something so ugly to you, but I wrote a poem a while ago and have wanted to hear what you think.
Its called WAR.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
Geezer
Thu, 2020-06-11 09:18
What woman...
wouldn't like man to say such romantic things? My wife love it when I say stuff like that! Good job, ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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tyro
Fri, 2020-06-12 04:10
thank you Geezer
thank you Geezer
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
tyro
Fri, 2020-06-12 04:11
I like your very funny reply,
I like your very funny reply, thank you very much.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight