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How to Purr
I want to learn how to purr
release the sound from deep below
the one caught somewhere in my throat
a voice I have but it’s hidden, remote.
It seems my desire has no cure
so I search my voice that you will know
what I’m feeling when my senses float
find passion’s scream I wish to emote.
I know it’s there when my senses blur
a lustful emotion I long to share
beautiful songs I have never written
purring love, I’m your soulful kitten.
Loreli
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Loreli
Thu, 2010-12-30 16:49
Thanks Shirley
This poem really isn't about cats at all you know....hehe! Glad you could help me with a few of the glitches in the lines before I posted it.
Love ya,
Lori
Loreli
Thu, 2010-12-30 16:58
Knew you knew! But couldn't
Knew you knew! But couldn't help myself from saying it! LOL PURRRRRRRRR
Love ya!
Lori