The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem effectively uses the vastness of the cosmos as a metaphor for divine love. The choice of words conveys a sense of awe and humility, which is a common theme in religious and spiritual poetry. The comparison of stars to jewels and laughter in a child's eyes adds a personal touch to the celestial imagery.

However, the poem could benefit from more varied sentence structure and rhythm to maintain reader interest. The repeated use of the phrase "I see" and "I am" can make the poem feel monotonous. Experimenting with different ways to express these sentiments could enhance the poem's overall impact.

The line "Stars sparkling against the black velvet of the sky" is a vivid image, but it is a commonly used description. Consider finding a unique way to describe this scene to make the poem more memorable.

The poem's message is clear and the theme is well developed. However, the line "And yet, He loves me!" seems to abruptly introduce the theme of divine love. It might be beneficial to weave this theme more subtly throughout the poem.

Finally, the poem could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of its central theme. The reader is told that the speaker feels small and loved, but not much else about their relationship to the divine. Providing more insight into this relationship could add depth to the poem.

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your absolute confidence in your beliefs. Your enthusiasm for the betterment of humanity, is actually infectious. However, even as we may differ in our philosophies, I respect your ability to project yourself so strongly. ~ Good job, ~ Geezer.
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thank you for the mood, solotude and tranquil beauty of your experiance. Living in the crowded, spinnig city, your poem feels like a soft caress.