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Submitted by sumsum22 on 28 October 2007 - 10:53am.| Updated 28 October 2007 - 11:53am.
Style / Type:
freeform
corners of a room
and ambience
like whitewash.
laughter, and
Joy
spread.
today turned
a corner
today
ballots
were drawn.
maybe I saw
the light of day
by seeing
the truth in you.
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
(1 vote)
Who?
Who is you? (confused)
In reality, “you” is a
In reality, “you” is a hypocritical ex-girlfriend. she taught me what not to do by acting the way she did.
Diggn it
Thanks for the light !