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Wandering eyes
Wistful wandering eyes
scattering across
the cool colorless
cloud filled skies.
Desperately
digging through
its shallow
shades of white
in search
for some subtle
sight of light .
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Comments
Edward nigma
Sat, 2024-03-30 10:00
My inspiration
My inspiration was these two songs by Joan Baez
https://youtu.be/B_K6z3HiRAs?si=aO4jPS-fpn7LCDBa
And
https://youtu.be/nADCKIT_Kbw?si=pNiB7j4VthIo9g9h
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Geezer
Sat, 2024-03-30 11:57
Thank you...
for sharing that with us. She was a very interesting woman in a very interesting time. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
Mon, 2024-04-01 15:24
Wandering Eyes
Hello, Edward,
Simply beautiful.
L
Edward nigma
Mon, 2024-04-01 20:45
Thank you
When I wrote it’s about finding the light or hope in the darkest hour .
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Lavender
Mon, 2024-04-01 22:35
Hello, Edward,
well written!
L
violet
Tue, 2024-04-09 10:04
Digging
I love your use of words here. Visceral and well written. Thank you for sharing.