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Puzzle pieces
People are not like
Pictures they were never
meant to be painted
Into perfection .
For what i am
what we are
Are pieces to
an unfinished
puzzle .
and we yearn to
find the final
face that puts all
our pieces into place.
The one hand
you can hold
and the only one who
will understand.
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Comments
Edward nigma
Sat, 2021-06-26 10:49
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/XMOj48iR19Y
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Michael Anthony
Sat, 2021-06-26 17:29
Thanks for sharing Hayden!
Thanks for sharing Hayden! Love the last few lines quite a bit:
we yearn to
find the final
face that puts all
our pieces into place.
The one hand
you can hold
and the only one who
will understand.
Well done!
Cheers
Michael Anthony
Edward nigma
Sat, 2021-06-26 17:39
Thank you
Thank you I got my inspiration for the movie picnic
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Geezer
Mon, 2021-06-28 05:58
I do believe...
this is one of your best!
The only thing I would change is the
line that says: "For we yearn..." I would use: And we yearn. ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
Mon, 2021-06-28 15:02
Thank you
It’s been hard to write because for months I’ve been having chronic nerve pain on the whole right side of my head because of the brain surgeries .
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Geezer
Mon, 2021-06-28 17:44
I'm sorry to hear...
of your troubles, hang in there, Can't wait to see what you are capable of when you are not in pain. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.