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Hide Jekyll, Hyde!
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Part demon, part angel,
your gaze draws me nigh.
Part animal, part divine;
the celestial hosts sigh.
Doubts leak like a broken tap,
assurances cloud the sky.
Drip and drop to fill the gap;
your balmy words can't dry.
An easel for pigments to trap;
row by row hung from a vine.
Libation pressed flesh and sap;
A bloodied cudgel rests supine.
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crypticbard
Fri, 2011-01-21 05:49
I love it too
Rosina, how perfectly J&H reflect the dual nature of people. Thanks for your kind words of comment.
Cheers, CB
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Geezer
Tue, 2011-01-11 12:51
Nice look...
at the attraction that we have for sin. How boring life would be, if we didn't have those distractions. ~ Gee
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crypticbard
Fri, 2011-01-21 05:51
Ah, yes Gee
Isn't this what has coloured the world and its history!
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