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marvelous just marvy.....on joining a workshop
marvelous just marvy
Neopoets I shall join,
from an outstanding players
point of view
shall enter and see
what loved can do
I walk an isolated path yes
but success I can never beget
as Loved lives in this skin
misunderstood mostly
But I shall now begin
and
participate through thick and thin
just let me join in
Here I send my inner voice
to speak aloud
and hope you will not shout
again
my way
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
swikmiller
Tue, 2014-09-02 22:55
loved
one fantastic poem and incredibly well-crafted. your changes in verb tense are spot-on and effective. your ability to write this great cry of self, sans punctuation -- I admire that!
lovedly
Tue, 2014-09-02 23:41
Thank you friend
I read yours maiden this morning I think
Now I have also taken the dramatic challenge
of Snowmans workshop
and have just now
posted my maiden contribution
.The punctuation ignored here were just by accident,
though as a poet I don't pay much attention
to either grammar or punctuation
Poetry is different to prose.
sans all but emotion
an innate creation
not by articulation ..
My opinion only
as I have been composing ///since past six decades
Many don't know here
what is a ''''decade''
mostly /many
still consider me
soil worth just a spade....
hope you won't
with your experience..
mand
Wed, 2014-09-03 00:48
Yeh!
Brilliant poem! - you hit the jackpot. Great that you've joined a workshop! :) :)
Go for it!
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
Wed, 2014-09-03 01:06
your and Ians hammer worked
I have already posted in SNOWMAN'S workshop
do read
and guide ...help with any corrections
u feel
thanks in advance