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You would ride out
it was there
when you changed colour
and between sleep and awake
I loved every word
you would ride out and pick bumblebees
your dreaming dizziness
like a mad happy
slot machine
we had a coffee party behind your closed eyelids
to just hear
and caress the edge of your imagination
to feel you as happiness
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Comments
judyanne
Sun, 2012-05-06 12:39
hi ester
really, this write makes no sense to me
- but i still love the images it gives me
especially
'we had a coffee party behind your closed eyelids
....to just hear
and caress the edge of your imagination
to feel you as happiness'
love judy
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Cloudthings
Sun, 2012-05-06 22:18
beautifully penned with all the imagery left just elusive enough
Ester, this is a delight, beautifully penned with all the imagery left just elusive enough to create an incredible play among what you spread.... It's like a divine picnic of memory snippets to me & so very nostalgic. It just filled me up with joy & longing & just a touch of melancholy in the gaps.
I would have been so happy to have written this one!
Cheers
Anni
My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"
Ester
Tue, 2012-10-16 13:54
Thankyou. E
Thankyou.
E
Esker
Mon, 2012-05-14 00:18
meridian
the tumble of the wheel
the glee of dusk
on her slope against the
wall of atmosphere
star rise
fathoming through
meridians deep
Thank You
your poems are a walk
in dazzling calm lament
Ester
Tue, 2012-10-16 13:55
Thank you Esker. E.
Thank you Esker.
E.