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WHIRLING DERVISH edit
Whirling Dervish
There are hearts that never feel
and souls as cold as steel
who like Whirling Dervishes
dance to disconnect --
Creators of blissful trances
and release into madness.
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-11-20 04:35
Adore this poem!
Perhaps a slight typo dsiconnect?
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Fri, 2015-11-20 07:51
Thanks, Jess, And yes, I need
Thanks, Jess, And yes, I need to correct the typo :)
joe
weirdelf
Mon, 2015-11-23 12:06
And may I may add, powerful metphorical content
superb
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Geremia
Mon, 2015-11-23 12:08
I am happy you noticed, my
I am happy you noticed, my friend.
joe
lovedly
Tue, 2015-11-24 21:32
UR SUPERB ...WHERE EVER WE GO
All over Neopoet
its JOE and only Joe
here we all go
metaphorical lovely show
let me know
So that one day I to may
also glow
dear friendly poet
my Joe
Geremia
Wed, 2015-11-25 08:39
Thank you, my dear friend,
Thank you, my dear friend, for making this morning worthwhile.
joe
lovedly
Wed, 2015-11-25 09:32
only friends like you
paths do show
Joe
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-11-30 18:58
Joe
A resurgence of thoughts arranged with perfection, keep writing our Friend, Yours Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
Geremia
Mon, 2015-11-30 21:18
Thanks, ian.
Thanks, ian.
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2015-12-01 00:23
Excellent,
Excellent, Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.