"immersed in a vex
of echolailia.."

someting like this

enticing hints of beyond the veil.

Frankly, I found the ending a tad disappointing, as if the quiver/shiver/glimpse is totally lost. Just me, but I think I would find it more satisfying if those last two lines offered some hope that the glimpse might grow or be repeated.

Maybe a different poem, maybe I'm just trying too hard to give you some critique [grins]

I always comprehended the importance of title thread
I just threw that away when I wrote mine

but of course in published mediums from bookshelves
off major chains where the money is at
I see the relevance
see why its important to let people follow the chain
the thoughts

I push my poetry hard Not greatly hard like some
that I met people with far greater minds then I
who were also doing art installations

I like the title in this
its like being in court an entrance line
and then the offense or defense of
your statements

basic oration
like soapbox poetry

as if I was to write a title
CRAYOLA
and then describe my toe nail clippings

I like the "shimmery" feel of this write
and I like Elfs thoughts

Thank You

"the melting time that
shivers past the rain
the shine
of dark and light
that creature
ennui.."

I love your words Judy
working them about
just my fragment of your
already well made poem

I am at a loss here as some of the words contradict the feeling, that the word,Ennui:- Boring depicts the poem well then you have a title that says:-
Vagary:- An extravagant or erratic notion or action,.. If the later should happen then the boredom would be gone..I think that Jess touched on this subject..
Now if the last lines were:-

to future Vagary
and
the illusion disperses

This would then make the title:- Ennui

Hey I am in trouble! I can feel it racing across the Oceans faster than a tsunami, LOL Yours with great thoughts, Ian.T