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Triumph
In the microcosm
Of my mind
A plethora of emotions
Race through
As the pendulum swings
My heart becomes
The sand in
An hour glass
That quickly empties
In the pits of my soul
Sorrow screams
As faith listens
Attentively
Sending her legions
To fight the demons
That stirs my insides
Perplexed by
Shivering Weakness
That overpowers
Me
Without hesitation
The sun shines once more
As faith incinerates my clouds
Opening my eyes to
New horizons
Surrounded by euphoria
Darkness becomes terrified
As it surrenders to faith
Now I can breathe again
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Comments
Apostolos "Paul...
Sat, 2010-11-20 19:37
yes
in this mas world a little triumph is a miracle, thanks for stopping by
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 01:42
I'm sure I gave you feedback
elsewhere.
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Sat, 2015-01-03 00:59
a rip roar of work...and hope
like a turmoil well.
well written Paul...
thank you!