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Sunku 12 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Fri, 2018-02-23 14:57

Winter
Is over
spring is here

Showers
are coming
new life rebirths

I hear
migrant birds
from far away

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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raj

Fri, 2018-02-23 15:25

Flows easily on tongues..

Flows easily on tongues...expressing the mood and changing natural scenarios. Has distinct haiku touch which is of course your forte.....you know I am your fan..

much love and regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Barbara Writes

Fri, 2018-02-23 22:46

Yeah raj

Haiku is my forte. Thanks for being fan. You always was

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Barbara Writes

Fri, 2018-02-23 22:42

Thanks mark

Glad you visited. I think I may change dog days and enjoy the springtime. It only last but a moment. It’s a sunku so there’s not too much more to add but the captured moment of spring

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lonlyhrtsclub13

Sat, 2018-02-24 10:49

Winter

Cannot leave fast enough. Thank you for the reminder that better days are coming.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

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Sunku 12 Workshop