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Something to Say

Submitted by Michael Anthony on Thu, 2024-05-23 09:45

They say the Colossus of Memnon hasn't sung
or made a sound now for a very long time.
The one to the right is said to have had the gift.

Maybe it has nothing more to say.
Or perhaps there’s a fault in the ancient stone.
Its companion to the left, has been forever silent on the matter.

I can’t sing, but I don’t have the complaints
of these ancient stones, so I write lyrics for you all the time.
I couldn't imagine no longer having something to say.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Last few words: 
Still have a grateful heart (thanks L!)
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Thu, 2024-05-23 15:21

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Hello, Michael,
Thank you for the intriguing education on the Colossi of Memnon! New and amazing info for this reader! How fantastic! It's wonderful to read such raw, yet tender poetry. You and yours are very blessed. While the entire poem "speaks" of the frailty of love, the last stanza, especially that remarkable last line reveals the constant gratitude (and amazement) for honest human love. Having once known this type of love, I find this so moving.
Thank you!
L

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