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Singular
I
Singular, alone.
A transient being ,
wandering the earth.
Connecting with some
disconnecting with others.
Assimilation of recollections.
Fated as a race to enter and exit, solo.
meanwhile waiting for the other half
of the equation..
The purpose of life is to
Forge the eternal connection.
Spiralling out only to return,
shelter from the cold.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 13:15
Shirl
Thanks Shirl,
love lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 13:17
Hey JC
Thank you that's high praise.
lou xx
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Kailashana2
Sat, 2010-11-20 08:32
Lou!
Lou!
I can only follow Seren's cue.
A Bow.
~
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 13:19
Well
Thanks , that is very kind of you .
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Psyve
Sat, 2010-11-20 11:59
Lou
Very beautifully expressed:
"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."
A sentiment I agree with.
Psyve
Psyve
Sat, 2010-11-20 11:59
Lou
Very beautifully expressed:
"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."
A sentiment I agree with.
Psyve
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 13:21
Psyve
Thank you . im still looking .
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 13:22
Xena
Thank you
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Candlewitch
Sat, 2010-11-20 14:09
Dear lou
I can totally relate to this poem. I love the style in which it is written. Your words just reach in a grab me.
love, cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lou
Sat, 2010-11-20 17:27
Cat
Thanks I'm glad you liked it
Lou xx
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
magics02
Sun, 2010-11-21 19:07
Great job Lou
I see in this one a great thinking verse and see your poetry is coming along great here. Miss chatting with you but I have been working alot on alot of projects so time is varied and I am happy to stop in here and read this tonite. great job Lou and hope your feeling fine:)
Love Mona
xoxoxo