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silent love

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2016-01-10 13:19

Silently Love we convey

I too silently saw your lips quicker
as your whole body did shiver
I was engaged and amazed
at your inner silence
between my eyes
you speared your intelligence
and
silently uttered those desired words
one lover says to another
how he and she also wish to hear

I LOVE YOU DEAR

but you blush only
no answer you give
but a silent yes
one does hear
and
you say come near
sweetness endear

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Free verse
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Candlewitch

Sun, 2016-10-09 15:18

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I smiled to myself as I read this poem :) its all in the eyes...one look says it all! lovely sentiment!

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-10-09 21:21

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who smiles at my sentimental poetry

Long time we haven't been blessed
the Niagara without your words
feels bereft

hope you will come by more
and take us from the deserted mundane life
to ashore

let the candle glow
remove the
witch
make it
which
if you need to be

thanks from loved /lovedly

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Esker

Mon, 2016-10-10 08:23

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at the real connections I made with people
I brushed off much
the intimacy factor not so greater the fulcrum
point then solid business
One must have solid business in life or love
or anything else..

pundit being

in the end
I see now this "Silent Love"
is like playing poker
of which I know nothing of
other then observing it at the
casinos...some private functions
of which i can say nothing of
Yet
I "see" where "they" played
their hand..for me..to me.
and I did accept
I could have played mine
back...but held my reserve
still thinking back remembering
the look ..their eyes now
told me everything
hindsight is twenty twenty
water under that bridge

but for the future
it makes me a better "Playah!"
and like any hustle
People love the edgy

Thank U!

lovedly

Mon, 2016-10-10 19:50

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Esker
too

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