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S P E K K E L . . K R E M E
Forest line
stretch like a taut ache
a hunger slipped with aces
and access desire
pulled against the crotch
and hip like the snout of
a holster warm
a walk perfumed and an eye
of fire
Caveat Venditor
how I adore
stature of splendour
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Ian.T
Mon, 2012-05-28 02:50
Steve
Yes I can see that the title is of a food, reminded me of a policeman sat in his car eating doughnuts, then the write talked about, what I thought is a person that you have ta accept as they are, though they are locked in the thoughts of a stature of splendour.
I feel that a lot of readers are lost with this one and I am floundering ??? ,
Yours Ian.T
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Esker
Mon, 2012-05-28 08:26
lost
thats okay Ian I read a lot of published poetry that made me
think WTF!
its actually about falling winter
ths snow flurries that make all the garbage of
a ruined year covered in purity and that
harsh death
when the trees sleep
and living is no longer easy
the card refrence is so old
you either have to be very good at something
or very lucky at times
but relying on one not the other in tight negotiations
is better then none
not just police carry guns either
kids do now in the big cities
women in their purses
sometimes it just is
like backup
Like the snout of a holster
a lot of times they are just
carried snubbed in behind
a waistband down the
front of the pants or on the
spine Warm because
its on the person from
morning till night
I met a lot of males who
were aggressive
not in the large nor loud
caricatures are what
social trends paint
but it was the females
who were interesting
as always in the mans
world operating and
suceeding
I liked the way they thought
and think
there is just something delicious
about winter
the way the air is perfumed
the way you notice peoples
personalities more
and what perfume they are
wearing
even when you are acu t ely
aware of what is being dealt
and life on the road means
accepting much
nothing is as it seems nor remains
forever
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