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Re-- In-carnation
u b so lovely
a petty dog
you cannot b
even if you do
sorry you won't know
nor will b able to catch me
I will fly like a butterfly ...sky high
LOL
But neither of us will know
who I
again why u
so why a darned
INCARNATION
4 us 2
carnations
alone should do
OK NOW ADVANCE thank you 4 reading me 2
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
TITLE revision
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-06-21 07:38
lol, lovedly,
I too wonder what is next for me... very clever write!
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Tue, 2022-06-21 13:36
Gee has RESERVED ME as his SWEET PUP
Cats you need to pray WE BE CATS YOU NOT THE man ha ha read my
sweet one
poem and Gees rnks
tnx CATS