The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem effectively utilizes repetition to emphasize the theme of reaching a critical juncture in various aspects of society and the environment. However, the use of rhetorical questions in each stanza could benefit from more variety to avoid redundancy.

The poem addresses a wide range of issues, from climate change to socio-economic disparity. While this breadth can be seen as a strength, it also risks diluting the impact of each individual issue. It might be beneficial to narrow the focus or develop each issue more thoroughly.

The final two lines introduce a new idea, suggesting that there may be regret about lessons not learned. This shift in tone and perspective is a bit abrupt. It might be more effective to gradually introduce this idea earlier in the poem or to provide more context for this shift.

The language used in the poem is straightforward and accessible, which makes the poem's themes and concerns easily understandable. However, the poem could benefit from more vivid and specific imagery to create a more immersive and emotional experience for the reader.

Lastly, the poem's rhythm and rhyme could be more consistent to enhance its musicality and flow. For example, the line "As civility and decency no longer matter" is noticeably longer than the other lines, which disrupts the rhythm. Adjusting the syllable count or phrasing could improve the poem's rhythm.

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Hello, William,
A very compassionate poem filled with timely questions. I tend to agree that we know the answers, or at least the direction in which life seems to be heading. But, as a J.R.R. Tolkien fan, and an admirer of an inspiring quote by Samwise Gamgee, "...there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo, and it's worth fighting for." Hope!
Thank you for this poem that makes me reflect on my own actions.
L

Very valid questions that I don't think anyone has an answer to. All we can do is what we think is right, and nobody can even agree on that. Alex.

the questions you ask are on my mind too...I feel that the people that run my country are greedy. they are willing to sacrifice the lower classes needs and wants for their grasping powers. sometimes I feel that the human race internal clocks are set on self-destruct. it makes me feel vulnerable and small, without a voice. I am sorry, I am having a very bad day. maybe I will have a better day tomorrow. your poem is brilliant and asks all the right questions. thank you for posting this.

*hugs, Cat

I think your poem, in our moments of silence asks the questions we are asking ourselves. The links between each question occur naturally, cause and effect.
"Have we passed the point of no return?" I think we have in so many ways that as individuals we cannot predict the future as it will always change and because we are human, we tend to look backwards to perceived better times.
Your poem was thought provoking. Ruby :) x