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Perfec Twirld
I'm writing from my memories
for, they tend to lead the way,
to a time where I possessed the keys
but, couldn't sieze the day.
I tremble with embarrassement
it's awkward that I'm me,
as I dilligently pay my dues
others live thier lives "scott free"!
These days, it seems I'm gullible
to think that what I dream,
if my dreams were even possible
we could be on the same team.
All in all, there is great wisdom
in promoting a world that's true,
we'll live in a special kingdom
where you love me, and I love you.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
docmaverick
Mon, 2011-04-25 02:23
Ian....
...it was supposed to have been something completely different, had to let go of this child. This one had a mind of it's own.
thanx, and happy keester bunny day!
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