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Nothing Better A Real Friend

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Thu, 2015-03-12 01:04

There's nothing better, a real friend
She wasn't being courteous
Changing plans and not telling her
She took her kindness for granted.

Her feeling hurt, left in the dirt
There's nothing better, a real friend
Feeling regret, she asked, you mad?
No time, just common courtesy.

No explanation is called for
What's necessary at this point?
There's nothing better, a real friend
An apology, I'm sorry

Hurt feelings, forsaken kindness
Feeling regret, apology
She mend the bond, friendship restored
There's nothing better, a real friend.

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judyanne

Thu, 2015-03-12 09:42

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Another good quatern Barb
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
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Barbara Writes

Thu, 2015-03-12 12:13

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I written give up to date. One for contest, this one and three others I've posted to my FBOOK and will post her once my 24 hour expire lol. I can't stop writing. I'm a addicted when I catch on to new things. Glad you like it.

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