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Never Mind

I've barked at the moon before
when it likely weren't my time,

I've supped with the likes of fools
and felt completely sublime;

I wish that I could write, right now
something that'd inspire, awe;

or cause my reader to be left
nearly standing on his own jaw.

Today, my focus is "dribble"
it's such a daunting task,

I think I covered this before
someone really aught to ask.

In the in-between-time
at the risk of sounding, dense;

I'll circle around my topic
and try not to make much sense;

on second thought, I'll just behave
and end this sitting tall,

maybe I'll change the subject
just to confuse you, after all.

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Good verse, excellent rhyming.
Or was it good verse? Did the lines really rhyme?
I'm CONFUSED!
LOL

Good stuff.

Respectfully, Race

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