welcome fellow writer. simple answer for the love of it
I was just a bit put off by the repetition of it all
but that just might be your style

6,7, and 8 work
guess I'm not the biggest fan of repetition then lol
Chrys

welcome to the site
and thank you for sharing your write with us

I like the idea, it just needs work. my suggestion is to cull a lot of those stanzas that don’t really say anything new, and work on a few, combining them as I have shown in my example here

dreamers dream and scheme
with desire to
manipulate

thinkers think and write
In hope they will
reveal discovery

lovers love and believe
aspiring to
receive completion

these are just examples to show you what I mean… you would be better to try and say something that people may not have thought of –
also, repetition is boring if it is not used for a reason… you can say the same thing in many ways…

hope this is of help
love judy

I'm glad to see that your work has been found so soon after posting. Again, welcome to the neopoet site! I like the subject mater you have chosen to write of. I think the title could be pared down to just; Motivations andreduced to a single capitalization of the first letter of the word, as otherwise it feels like shouting.

Suggestions: With these lines:

Dreamers dream
In hopes that they will
Come true.

it might read smoother to say:

Dreamers dream
In hopes that their
Dreams come true

and I think you could drop the last stanza, ending the poem with these lines:

Yearners yearn
In hopes that they will
Improve.

I very much liked the tone and flow of this piece!

I hope I have been of help to you.

always, Cat

I feel redundant.

I like the concept, endorse Judyanne suggestions and also dislike the question ending.

Writers write
In hopes that they will
Reveal themselves. [really? I don't, my motivation varies]

If you could come up with a more punchy ending it would really make this poem.