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Laconic Pre-Sleep Scatterings
one day
that rooster
is going to awaken
an axe murderer
stumbling drunk
is easier than
suicide
the haunting song of a loon,
ending with a giggle
a singer's words
are useless
to a drummer
an anywhere
anytime hat
is a myth
a cuddly cat
doesn't care
that you are
macho
be cool
that four-eyed geek
might own you one day
his first word,
"mama"
as was his last
kids
now-a-days,
unwittingly Peter-panned
being beautiful
and blonde
still has its eventualities
climbing a mountain
"because it is there"
baffles me
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Comments
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2017-08-01 13:16
Each and every one a
Each and every one a sagacious banquet.
Obi.
brittle light
Wed, 2017-08-02 12:35
It takes sagacity to
It takes sagacity to recognize sagaciousness
thanks Obi
Al