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Insomnia
ongoing internal conversations
cloud what reality is slowly
sinking out of me
night shrounded in thoughts
and thoughts
and overanalyzations
distracting the unconscious
from drifting into dreams
and crippling the day
upon wake
Style / type:
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
mand
Sun, 2014-09-07 03:43
Hi there!
I could totally relate to this poem - as I suspect so could many others! I like the last two lines because they show that insomnia has a crippling effect upon waking - sometimes for a couple of days!
Yeh! I like it
Love Mand xxxx
Shamoneness
Sun, 2014-09-07 15:05
Mand,
Thank you! : )
Lonnie
Sun, 2014-09-07 17:37
Hi Shamoneness,
Good poem to ponder at three A.M. when I can't sleep! LOL!! Seriously, this is a wonderful write, that gets its message across quite profoundly!
Shamoneness
Mon, 2014-09-08 00:42
Thank
you very much Lonnie! : )