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The End of the World
The End of the World
Written by Kelly Ann Wilson
You can try to comfort me
With how the moon prevails and pulls the tides
The wheat still turns golden brown
From the sun which still shines
And maybe it’s true the rivers run on
Between the ever-growing pines
You can say it’s not the end of the world
Oh, but it is the end of mine
Written January 13, 2024
© 2024 Kelly Ann Wilson
Style / type:
Free verse
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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Read my writer’s blog at https://kwilsonarts.wordpress.com
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Comments
Leslie
Fri, 2024-01-19 04:09
Kelly
I thouroghly enjoyed this poem. This is a subject
that is of great interest to me.
The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!
Candlewitch
Fri, 2024-01-19 07:11
Hello Kelly Ann,
I too, enjoyed your poem. my favorite lines are:
You can say it’s not the end of the world
Oh, but it is the end of mine
Some punctuation would be nice. Otherwise there is nothing I would change.
Would you please read my poem titled: Snow Globes (?) I would really value your opinion. Thank you.
*hugs, Cat
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