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Beautiful Eyes
There's beauty
in each one's eyes
so we see differently
to ensure
we don't dwell
in an indifferent
mundane world
we all are beautiful
humans
animals
birds
and
bees
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
All eyes are beautiful
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Sun, 2023-01-29 12:48
Bees have compound eyes
I wish that we could be a bee
A fuzzy wuzzy bumblebee
A buzzing bumbling bee we be
A-buzzing 'round a basswood tree
He-hee!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Sun, 2023-01-29 12:55
thanks Thomas
u r humorous
Triskelion
Sun, 2023-01-29 14:28
If we had compound eyes
We could see a lot more beauty...may be why bees are attracted by flowers. Now write a poem about flowers and bees.
Please.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-30 12:25
Thomas
You can wear double glasses or carry Binoculars you will see better AHA
Triskelion
Sat, 2023-02-11 14:41
When I read
your poetry, it's like looking through a kaleidoscope.
May be like bees see....oui?
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Sat, 2023-02-11 23:56
nice multi coloured did u mean ur eyes
thanks a tonnnneeeeeeeee
scribbler
Sun, 2023-01-29 15:16
Hi loved
Try it using each one's eyes instead of eye. Even an insect with compound vision has 2 eyes lol
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-30 00:37
Thanks Stan and Lav
for he edit I had it in mind ...but perhaps ignored the rhyme
Thanks ... this is what Neo is for
rgds
Lavender
Sun, 2023-01-29 15:44
Beautiful Eyes
Hello, Lovedly,
I agree with Stan - plural eyes in the second line, especially to go along with your title. So glad to look at the world through your inspiring poem and your "Beautiful Eyes."
Thank you!
Lav
Seren
Mon, 2023-01-30 01:51
Lovely
I agree with all the above suggestions.
I think you could've expanded this made your poems world bigger.
I see you've changed that second line.
Well done.
Love and hugs Sis xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-30 03:48
yes Seren
I am a Neo follower
Waiting a poem from you
aeons past by
Seren
Mon, 2023-01-30 05:03
Read your messages. I sent
Read your messages. I sent you one hrs ago.
Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-30 05:24
Great I shall wait
Let the world know ...an anony once lived
I must also know someone
another poem composed
before i ebbed...
Aussie sis