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Shrink
Power surging twisting and dipping
Poleaxing and reviving me
Currents travelling to the brain
Joy a sense of well being
Pleasure untamed
Limbs and body thrashing out of control
Lurching undulating driving me insane
Shocks of pure terror
A loneliness remains
Draining my will
Going for the kill
Driving home the thin sharp blade
Lacerating my soul
All Is calm filled with mind numbing boredom
Unrelenting strain
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
This is supposed to contain no punctuation or breaks, to symbolise how there is no rest from feelings.
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Comments
lou
Tue, 2011-09-13 06:37
Xena
Such is life
Thanks
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Tue, 2011-09-13 16:09
Lonnie
thank you
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!