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Icy Waters
ICY WATERS
Icy waters
pure and clean
rushing down a mountain stream
sparkling diamonds in sunlight
over rock and stone
furious in their flight
into Ocean’s deep.
swirling into One
never to return from where they come.
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Comments
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-11-24 20:23
My first thought, Joe, forgive my pragmatic mind,
was "yes they do!" They evaporate from the oceans and become mountain streams again.
Still, a pretty write.
cheers,
Jess
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