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Blood Lust
Eyes blaze in deep within the murk
fangs dripping in inhumanity,
immortal companions veiled in depravity,
draped in profanity.
Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.
Terror stricken hearts give way
pierced jugular,
drained of dignity.
Human husks left by the way side.
victims of blood lust.
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2011-08-06 09:29
Hi Lou,
Nice to see you're still on the prowl! Good work. Nice and dark.
Stalking their prey
with cat like precision,
sensuous seduction ,
playing with their food.
always, Cat
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And reply in kind, thanks.
lou
Sat, 2011-08-06 10:01
Cat
Thank you, lol
Love lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!