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~air of contentment
the heart of a woman
is deeply rooted
like a wild violet
and to know
the way berries warm inside a
hand
to watch vines unfold a thousand
blossoms
see poppies spread wide
open
to know this
is the only wisdom
worth knowing
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Ink Artist
Fri, 2011-07-29 14:28
thanks
from what i know personally of wild violets in my area, they have a very dense, fibrous root system. that seemed like a good metaphor to the heart of a woman! thanks for stopping in for a read! :)
~lori
"I am the lonely soul of a waterfall."
Dalton
Sat, 2011-07-30 20:00
Nice one Ink Artist
I think its wonderful for a female poet to articulate what it is to be a woman. Especially for a man's edification.
John